When you say "intro", do you mean like "an introduction for people who sorta want to know what the 506th does", or do you mean "intro to 506th video makers to use"?
If it's the latter, it's far too long and slow. I'd look at CPT Drumheller's (or any of the 15th guys) intros that they used for his ops with the 15th. Quick, attention getting, and quickly told us that it was the 15th with little to no wait.